Typo and text related issues

[Lezard]

Please use this thread to report any issue related to the texts in the game.

This includes
- Typos
- Grammar mistakes

What should not be reported are:
- Punctuation problems
- Spacing problems
- Typos in HTML tags or other zones of text that can't normally be seen
- Suggestions to improve sentences that are already grammatically correct
- Any other problem not related to texts (please create a new topic for that)


Errors reported in this thread are usually fixed in the following game patch.
It is highly recommended to make a forum search before reporting a typo to make sure no one already reported it before.

[Lezard]

last paragraph, 1st screen, new dungeon Bile, first sentence reads: "Water", she says. - proper grammar dictates the comma should be within the quotation marks, not outside them... (http://grammartips.homestead.com/inside.html for reference)

This is something that I will not change. As I already said before, however more proper the alternative is, I refuse to follow this obscure and illogical rule. It's like writing in maths 3 * (5 + 2 = ) 21.

Also, as a general rule please avoid reporting Punctuation / Spacing problems.

[Lezard]

Don't worry if you see your typo report removed: the posts are deleted as soon as they are integrated in a patch.

[Shalq]

New rare charm "Essence Drain" has Strengthening (R4) as one of the requirements. I think it's a typo unless there's a new rank of this skill.
But still, it doesn't make sense even if it was (R3), since R3 requires minimum 40lvl, and this is a level 38 charm... wth?



(I don't have this charm yet, so I can't confirm if it is usable with only R2, or R3. I've seen this typo @homepage)

[Generica]

New rare charm "Essence Drain" has Strengthening (R4) as one of the requirements. I think it's a typo unless there's a new rank of this skill.
But still, it doesn't make sense even if it was (R3), since R3 requires minimum 40lvl, and this is a level 38 charm... wth?



(I don't have this charm yet, so I can't confirm if it is usable with only R2, or R3. I've seen this typo @homepage)

It's a bug with the requirement I think. Neither my level 39 R2 strengthening or level 43 R3 strengthening can use it.

[Shalq]

Small text issue, which may confuse players who read battle logs...
In Antechamber of Circinus, Sharpen's aura is named exactly the same as Protective Layer's aura:

Bladed Runic Golem uses [Sharpen]
Bladed Runic Golem gains Protective Layer
Ionizing Module ionizes, Bladed Runic Golem's next magic attack is increased by up to 4
Protective Layer takes effect, Bladed Runic Golem's next melee attack is increased by up to 4

Bladed Runic Golem uses [Protective Layer]
(...)
Bladed Runic Golem gains Protective Layer
Ionizing Module ionizes, Bladed Runic Golem's next magic attack is increased by up to 4
Protective Layer takes effect, Bladed Runic Golem's next melee attack is increased by up to 4
Protective Layer takes effect, Bladed Runic Golem's armor raises to 50

I think it was not intended to be like this.




Oh and also; I see that You have changed [Charred Earth] text, thanks   

I've forgotten about just one other charm that has the same "Aura: attach to self" effect: [Misguiding Flare]

[Corpsemourne]

Ch19: Order
gracious wilderness and he would never be a solider again

solider should be soldier.

[Thatguy]

Fyodor collapses of exhaustion.

Persistent Guard uses [Manhunt]
The gard gives up the chase
Persistent Guard is defeated.

[Freyajack]

Front page:

"It offers a rich game experience for both the novices and the online RPG experts" should be "It offers a rich game experience for both the novices and the online RPG experts".

(Remove "the" before novices and online).

[Toben]

Kysin's Keep, "The Library" section:

....with the terrible images of the folly of you're the gods and for that we are forever in your debt.

It should be either "your gods" or "the gods".

[Antiviper]

The Murder of Prelex - (Antiviper,Dijn, Paladin Possessed ) vs (Rya'baal, Archlord of Glooms,Dijn's Corruption)

There is an useless extra space between "Possessed" and ")"

Btw I think [Nhyle's Voice Orb] have this problem too.

[Bunnyrabbit]

Minor spelling error:
In Miscellaneous FAQ > What should I do if I want to support this game?
"Hmm, we need about $10 millions ..."

You shouldn't have the 's' on millions.

[Mcbee]

The item [Terracotta Shield ] has the extra space at the end as well.

[Antiviper]

The item [Terracotta Shield ] has the extra space at the end as well.

Hmm... I found many AA R2 items/fights have this problem.

"Iced Glade - (Antiviper,Frozen Lifetree ) vs (Ice Devil )"

----------------

Team (Antiviper, Dying Man) is victorious!
Antiviper receives charm: [Blood Aegis] (4/5)
Antiviper receives item: [Rosewood]
Antiviper receives charm : [Murderous Rage] (4/5)

It seems all L37 hidden charms have an extra space here.

[Greensky]

The Chronicles of Estiah Chapter 21    "Just think him as my fumbling servant," I am fairly certain you should have the word of in between think and him.
Chapter 20   "as the killing and the killed definitely shared the same agony." I have no idea what to make of this. Sorry if it is correct.